Thursday, September 29, 2005

The Wait

She stared, The Open Space.
Loneliness....

When will He arrive?
Impatience....

I hope He arrives. Soon.
Is it wrong of me to hope such of him?
Tears!




The promises made, the dreams shared.




I broke them all, shattered......















Heaven is a lovely place
Is it wrong, I long for him to meet me here?




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This is the series of 55 word stories which have been going around. Personally I felt the concept was challenging. Special mention to this
55 word story by Deepak.

Wont tag anyone, I'll just throw this open to those who have not tried it. Its good exercise.

PS:
Iyer, go for it!

36 Comments:

Blogger Medha.. said...

This was a truly fantastic story hon!! *round of applause* just for u! Gonna try this..

=]

September 29, 2005 12:34 AM  
Blogger APOO said...

Thanks Medha. Go ahead. Try it. I am sure you will come up with something even more fantastic! :)

September 29, 2005 12:36 AM  
Blogger iyer education said...

beautiful man... this was FANTASTIC... *ekdam zabardast*

September 29, 2005 1:03 AM  
Blogger APOO said...

Thanks Iyeri. Now your turn!

September 29, 2005 1:10 AM  
Blogger Nicole said...

That almost got tears to my eyes.

September 29, 2005 1:11 AM  
Blogger Medha.. said...

Something more fantastic than what you wrote? Man, that's a lot of pressure! Gotta really think hard now..

=D

September 29, 2005 1:28 AM  
Blogger Deepak Jeswal said...

Heavenly!

Add my round of applause to the comments above.

PS-Thanks for the mention!

September 29, 2005 2:32 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

appu u cheater ...u used only 54 words ...'?'is a symbol ...
I have a story of a gr8 worrior ....
Lets see ...

Bhime SEN Hoshi was a gr8 worrier
He had a horse named kala ghoda.He sat on the horse and then thabadic
thabadic
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and then he got down from the horses.

thts 55 words ....

-amit

September 29, 2005 9:46 AM  
Blogger abhi said...

Pops: Excellant touoch ...
BTW, who's the HE you're referring to ...
and yea .. the SHE too?

Sharma: I like your story man .. you shud blog too

September 29, 2005 10:40 AM  
Anonymous alex said...

Thats deep Apoo. Lets head for the bar this weekend and discuss more heavenly bodies over some drinks!

September 29, 2005 1:04 PM  
Anonymous winny said...

nice work re... sob sob...

September 29, 2005 4:29 PM  
Blogger APOO said...

Nicole: No crying here. You are allowed to cry and wimp only on Iyers blog!

Tima: Like Abbs said. Start blogging.

Abbs: SHE is dead, so doesnt matter. And I dont think you are interested in any HE... so overall, doesnt matter!

Alex: Lets go. Why do we need a weekend for that tho?

Winny: Thanks re. But why do u keep sobbing re? Or is SoB short for a curse I know?

September 29, 2005 4:59 PM  
Anonymous winny said...

Apoo; Wiese that sob was me crying..but again Apoo if u insist ....im actually taking lessons from real nice curses and also making shorts for it ....cant tell u whos teaching me tho...

September 29, 2005 7:24 PM  
Blogger APOO said...

Dont use those curses on me... u know what happens when u do bad things to me like reminding me of Samosas!

September 29, 2005 10:34 PM  
Anonymous winny said...

hmm true true .. me scared now.. let me try to learn more gaalis frm my guru...till then

September 30, 2005 12:10 AM  
Blogger iyer education said...

apoo: iyer has run out of tissue papers... so no wimping and crying over iyer's blog too... wimping and crying can be kept for 10:30 pm - 11:30 pm IST on star plus when you see all saas bahu serials...

ps: Paras likes and watches this serial called "Baa Bahoo Aur Baby" on Star Plus... i guess u know paras... if you dont, abhi will help you

September 30, 2005 1:49 AM  
Blogger IdeaSmith said...

Wonderfully done, Apoorva! I didn't think you'd be interested in trying this n that's the only reason I didn't tag you.

September 30, 2005 8:33 AM  
Blogger abhi said...

Iyer: Bewa ko kya ho gaya be? and what in the wild world of TV show history is Baa Bahoo Aur Baby? No K's here so it dosnt sound like eeeeeKta Kapoor ... and i wont help apoo or anyone get to know "the Bew" ...

winny: who's the gaali guru u so talk about here? do i know that person?

September 30, 2005 12:24 PM  
Anonymous Winny said...

Abs:Comeon... U know who it is....

Iyer; Baa bahoo and Baby?????? hmm is it the junior version of saas bhi kabhi bahut thi?

there was a baa and bahu in that too....LOL

No kiddin what has the world come to...
Should have been Bird Baangd aur Bewa....

September 30, 2005 7:46 PM  
Blogger APOO said...

Iyer: I know Paras. I have hung around and got drunk with the full group on Nandanvan T-Top. Full group minus you. Only saw u when u came in chaddi banyan!

Smithy: No no, no tagging me. Trust me, if I feel like it, I pick it up and blog it. Tag or no tag.

September 30, 2005 10:41 PM  
Blogger Madame Mahima said...

woah apoo...you're full of surprises arentcha?
well done buddy!

September 30, 2005 11:11 PM  
Blogger abhi said...

Winny: Bird, Baangd aur Bewa ...
now that cracked me up man ...
hahahaaa

mannnnnn

October 01, 2005 3:56 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Sahi hai appu teri nikal padi-----

October 01, 2005 9:54 AM  
Anonymous WINNY said...

Abs:u cracked up at 4 in the morning???? Tere ko kya ho gaya........

October 01, 2005 10:45 AM  
Blogger APOO said...

Abbs: U r right... it actually does sound hilarious now.

Winny: He is cracked up, irrespective of time

October 01, 2005 12:34 PM  
Anonymous winny said...

atleast hes not on crack....thank god

October 01, 2005 9:55 PM  
Blogger APOO said...

Can u be sure about that?

October 02, 2005 2:34 PM  
Anonymous Winny said...

ya i think im pretty sure...

October 02, 2005 10:35 PM  
Blogger Arpi said...

Hey Apoo. Why are your last two posts leaning towards the dark depressing side? Its not the Apoorva I know (altho the posts have been thought provoking).

Get back to your humourous self else you will find me in Baltimore, kicking your ass!

October 02, 2005 11:04 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

hey arpi

pls do me a favor ....irrespective of his next blog ...pls find appu and kick his ass.....

- Amit

October 03, 2005 10:18 AM  
Blogger APOO said...

Arpi: Yeah. Certain events in life has made it more depressing over the last few weeks. Could you send me money?

Tima: She doesnt need to. I usually do it myself.

October 04, 2005 6:51 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Yeh u r the do it myself type of guy
Me-Me types 3 times
-amit

October 04, 2005 11:34 AM  
Anonymous deepakjeswal said...

Hi Apoorva, Can u suggest a good site for uploading music to be put up on blog - an audio version of vimeo is what i m looking for!

Regs
DJ

October 05, 2005 9:18 AM  
Blogger abhi said...

pakk gaya .. where's the new post man

October 05, 2005 10:29 AM  
Blogger APOO said...

DJ: I have no first hand experience on this. Try playersparadise.net which I found while randonly surfing. I am not sure about the details since I have never used it.

Abbs: Any inputs for the above? Uploading songs.... kuch pata hai?
And yeah.... new post.... I know... high time... outta ideas :D

October 05, 2005 5:53 PM  
Blogger iyer education said...

apoo: mein bhi pak gaya... jaldi kar... naya post likh

October 06, 2005 1:59 AM  

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