The Wait
She stared, The Open Space.
Loneliness....
When will He arrive?
Impatience....
I hope He arrives. Soon.
Is it wrong of me to hope such of him?
Tears!
The promises made, the dreams shared.
I broke them all, shattered......
Heaven is a lovely place
Is it wrong, I long for him to meet me here?
Loneliness....
When will He arrive?
Impatience....
I hope He arrives. Soon.
Is it wrong of me to hope such of him?
Tears!
The promises made, the dreams shared.
I broke them all, shattered......
Heaven is a lovely place
Is it wrong, I long for him to meet me here?
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This is the series of 55 word stories which have been going around. Personally I felt the concept was challenging. Special mention to this 55 word story by Deepak.
Wont tag anyone, I'll just throw this open to those who have not tried it. Its good exercise.
PS: Iyer, go for it!
posted by APOO at 12:30 AM
33 Comments:
This was a truly fantastic story hon!! *round of applause* just for u! Gonna try this..
=]
Thanks Medha. Go ahead. Try it. I am sure you will come up with something even more fantastic! :)
beautiful man... this was FANTASTIC... *ekdam zabardast*
Thanks Iyeri. Now your turn!
Something more fantastic than what you wrote? Man, that's a lot of pressure! Gotta really think hard now..
=D
Heavenly!
Add my round of applause to the comments above.
PS-Thanks for the mention!
appu u cheater ...u used only 54 words ...'?'is a symbol ...
I have a story of a gr8 worrior ....
Lets see ...
Bhime SEN Hoshi was a gr8 worrier
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and then he got down from the horses.
thts 55 words ....
-amit
Pops: Excellant touoch ...
BTW, who's the HE you're referring to ...
and yea .. the SHE too?
Sharma: I like your story man .. you shud blog too
Thats deep Apoo. Lets head for the bar this weekend and discuss more heavenly bodies over some drinks!
nice work re... sob sob...
Nicole: No crying here. You are allowed to cry and wimp only on Iyers blog!
Tima: Like Abbs said. Start blogging.
Abbs: SHE is dead, so doesnt matter. And I dont think you are interested in any HE... so overall, doesnt matter!
Alex: Lets go. Why do we need a weekend for that tho?
Winny: Thanks re. But why do u keep sobbing re? Or is SoB short for a curse I know?
Apoo; Wiese that sob was me crying..but again Apoo if u insist ....im actually taking lessons from real nice curses and also making shorts for it ....cant tell u whos teaching me tho...
Dont use those curses on me... u know what happens when u do bad things to me like reminding me of Samosas!
hmm true true .. me scared now.. let me try to learn more gaalis frm my guru...till then
apoo: iyer has run out of tissue papers... so no wimping and crying over iyer's blog too... wimping and crying can be kept for 10:30 pm - 11:30 pm IST on star plus when you see all saas bahu serials...
ps: Paras likes and watches this serial called "Baa Bahoo Aur Baby" on Star Plus... i guess u know paras... if you dont, abhi will help you
Wonderfully done, Apoorva! I didn't think you'd be interested in trying this n that's the only reason I didn't tag you.
Iyer: Bewa ko kya ho gaya be? and what in the wild world of TV show history is Baa Bahoo Aur Baby? No K's here so it dosnt sound like eeeeeKta Kapoor ... and i wont help apoo or anyone get to know "the Bew" ...
winny: who's the gaali guru u so talk about here? do i know that person?
Abs:Comeon... U know who it is....
Iyer; Baa bahoo and Baby?????? hmm is it the junior version of saas bhi kabhi bahut thi?
there was a baa and bahu in that too....LOL
No kiddin what has the world come to...
Should have been Bird Baangd aur Bewa....
Iyer: I know Paras. I have hung around and got drunk with the full group on Nandanvan T-Top. Full group minus you. Only saw u when u came in chaddi banyan!
Smithy: No no, no tagging me. Trust me, if I feel like it, I pick it up and blog it. Tag or no tag.
woah apoo...you're full of surprises arentcha?
well done buddy!
Winny: Bird, Baangd aur Bewa ...
now that cracked me up man ...
hahahaaa
mannnnnn
Sahi hai appu teri nikal padi-----
Abs:u cracked up at 4 in the morning???? Tere ko kya ho gaya........
Abbs: U r right... it actually does sound hilarious now.
Winny: He is cracked up, irrespective of time
atleast hes not on crack....thank god
Can u be sure about that?
ya i think im pretty sure...
Arpi: Yeah. Certain events in life has made it more depressing over the last few weeks. Could you send me money?
Tima: She doesnt need to. I usually do it myself.
Yeh u r the do it myself type of guy
Me-Me types 3 times
-amit
Hi Apoorva, Can u suggest a good site for uploading music to be put up on blog - an audio version of vimeo is what i m looking for!
Regs
DJ
pakk gaya .. where's the new post man
DJ: I have no first hand experience on this. Try playersparadise.net which I found while randonly surfing. I am not sure about the details since I have never used it.
Abbs: Any inputs for the above? Uploading songs.... kuch pata hai?
And yeah.... new post.... I know... high time... outta ideas :D
apoo: mein bhi pak gaya... jaldi kar... naya post likh
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