Tears
In bed, cuddled up, crying silently,
Just coz the one you love left you?
Thoughts from the past, like a blizzard,
storming your brain, your eyes, tearing,
Just coz it didnt work out?
Love, over used, over abused,
till you finally have to let go,
and take solace in those tears?
Cry if you must, but let your tears cleanse those emotions,
Its not worth it.
Take life with a pinch of salt.
Have you ever tasted your tears?
Even they are salty!
Just coz the one you love left you?
Thoughts from the past, like a blizzard,
storming your brain, your eyes, tearing,
Just coz it didnt work out?
Love, over used, over abused,
till you finally have to let go,
and take solace in those tears?
Cry if you must, but let your tears cleanse those emotions,
Its not worth it.
Take life with a pinch of salt.
Have you ever tasted your tears?
Even they are salty!
23 Comments:
bouncer gaya... but just one suggestion... doctors and health experts say too much of salt (read tears) aka sodium chloride is not good for health...
Good advice indeed!
=S ok what have you done with the real apoo?!!
on a serious note...very nicely written..who's it about?
Hmm...even in poetry, the man talks sense. I like it.
apoo! im very impressed and surprised! u made so much sense sense!
dude word of wisdom...
when a girl leaves u ....rush to the nearest temple ... say thank u god ...for good redance to bad rubish ...
then rush to the nearest strip bar ..get a lap dance ...
n then go to the nearest bar n drink yur ass out ....
This is the bst way to get over ....any woman .....
"How can I get over u ...unless she gets under me"...have u ever heared this before
-Amit
#Demi: Hmmm... why do you think they call me sailor (ask Abhi for details)
#Iyer: Which is why... let them out of the system. If its not good, let em out!
#Menagerie: Thanks! Lots more to come!
#Mahi: Its abot you, its about me, its about everybody!
#Smithy: Thank you... but it was not meant to be a poem... but now that u say... fine... poem indeed.
#Pixoo: Yeah, I know.... for a change right? *Did you mean I didnt make sense earlier :@ *
#Amit: Its not always about a girl (or a guy) leaving you. It could be much beyond...
Nevertheless, good advice! :)
Who did this? I'll chokeslam her if she bothers you too much !!!
Giving you life, with this blog.. :)
u alrite bro?
Alap & Paro: None of these events are based on any happenings in my life.... but yeah, Alap, if u wanna really chokeslam people, I shall send you a list =D
damn .. everybody around me's crying .. what's with the world ..
winny kya kiya tuney? if i find bird crying tomorrow ... i will hold u responsible
#Abhi: If everyone around you is crying, that means you are the one making them cry (?)
Oh, and if Bird cries... please record it on video?
yes pops ... quite possible ... lets try and analyze why i make people cry now
and for bird .. yes i have the cam ready ..
bird: don't cry when i'm off to Sepang
I like the (?)
don't know what it means though
Errr...ok! Yet again, what can I say...Congrats on getting hitched!? :P
update.
where are those posts u promised us after u got back from your bombay trip?
#Abhi: Going to Sepang? Now u make me cry! See, you are the cause!!!
#Brad: U sly sly sly lil fella. When is that detective agency coming up?
#Winny: Yes, lets beat up Abhi! U with me?
#Silky Mahi: If I have ever dreamed about a crazy Mom-In-Law, you fit the persona to the max!
huh? crazy mom in law?? where did that come from :S
1st time on your blog ...really worth every minute...Beautifully written..each word conveys the depth of feelings...
Sly, sly fella is correct. Brad, when did you stop being a blog-bhoot and turn Sherlock?
And apoo, lazy man, stop using your comments section like a chat room and POST!
looks like my earlier comment dint get registered..?
anyway i had said ..good lines up there!
good blog .. adding you!
dude on a serious note ... things tht can affect u n make u cry are the ones tht u get use to .....
dont get use to anything and u will be a happy man forever ....
-amit
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